Word Limit - 369
Required Phrase - Bewildered
Forbidden Words - Knock, Lock(ed), Super
Extra Credit - Set the story during mid-day.
Bonus Words -
Tell us how she got the slipper (25 words)
Tell us about the neighborhood (25 words)
The machine
made a horrible racket and then stopped working. It felt like her heart stopped
too. She had an interview in thirty minutes. She opened the dryer door, and her
meager collection of clothes were sopping wet. A curse word escaped her lips, think. Her friend, Katie, was moving out
today of apartment 6, next door, and since it was midday she was hoping Katie
was there and not finished moving. Peeking out her door, no one was in the
hallway, not even a noise, and she slipped her feet in her slippers and rushed
down the hall.
When she
rapped desperately on the door, she realized how ridiculous she was. What was
the point of slippers if she was butt naked? Habit, but she must look insane.
And she still had the notes for the interview in her hand. She could only hope
Katie would answer, laugh, pull her inside, and loan her some clothes so that
she could make it to the interview desperately needed.
A man opened
the door. Bewildered, she wondered if someone new had already moved to this
rundown neighborhood- this was an interesting way to say hello and greet your
neighbor. She didn't know if she should scream, apologize, walk away or say
something...anything. He was staring, gorgeous eyes, broad shouldered, bulging
biceps. "Like what you see?" he asked, her gaze was obvious.
She snapped
out of her confusion. Shrugging, she decided false bravado. "Like what
you see?" she parried back, and then stood on tiptoe, looking for Katie.
"Is Katie here?"
"No,
I'm her brother, and she's at the new place."
She found
boxes and ducked around him, moving in. "Tell her Natalie borrowed some
clothes for an interview. Does she still have some here?" already
rummaging, she didn't see the appreciative look in his eyes.
"What
will you give me if I show you?" he teased. She faced him, gorgeous she thought again.
"A date
tonight, followed up by a massage for your help moving and showing a naked woman
clothes."
He laughed,
"never thought I'd show a sexy lady how to cover herself," he said as
he walked past towards a room. She said a silent thanks and followed close
behind. She'd make it to the interview on time, and had a date with a hottie to
celebrate tonight. She just hoped he was paying, money was a little tight right
now.
A wonderful spin on the "locked out naked" scenario, and a date thrown in on top of it. I used to do my laundry in the laundry room across the hall from my apartment and made "the naked leap" more than a few times, but darn my luck, the sexy neighbor in 1425 never noticed.
ReplyDeleteThanks for playing, I love seeing you on the list!
Yet another great view of what was happening. I love the "borrow a cup of clothing" scenario. :) I like that in spite of the dryer malfunctions, she had some good things happen.
ReplyDeleteLOL! Great little story.
ReplyDeleteJohn we are quite simply stalking each other! I posted on yours right about the same time you did on mine. Yours was amazingly hot.
DeleteWell of course she is wearing slippers, do you know the germs that might be all over an apartment hallway.
ReplyDeleteHe must be gorgeous to get away with the Quid Pro Quo deal!
I wish I had neighbors with gorgeous brothers! Great take! So fun FFFing with you!
ReplyDeleteA cute story!
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